Hi Losana, it's great that you have written what TEE stands for to remind yourself of your writing structure. You have included lots of explanations and examples, well done. I also like that you summarized the subtopics (your hobby, culture and sport) in your introduction and you used a rhetorical question.
Max sounds like a really special part of your family. I have a cat that was also from a home that didn't treat it too well. It's so amazing to see these animals grow closer to you when they get use to your home.
Remember to include a conclusion at the end. In your conclusion, you can talk about the importance of knowing your identity. You can also encourage your readers to find out more about their own culture and history.
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ReplyDeleteHi Losana, it's great that you have written what TEE stands for to remind yourself of your writing structure. You have included lots of explanations and examples, well done. I also like that you summarized the subtopics (your hobby, culture and sport) in your introduction and you used a rhetorical question.
ReplyDeleteMax sounds like a really special part of your family. I have a cat that was also from a home that didn't treat it too well. It's so amazing to see these animals grow closer to you when they get use to your home.
Remember to include a conclusion at the end. In your conclusion, you can talk about the importance of knowing your identity. You can also encourage your readers to find out more about their own culture and history.